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Hi Nona,
I am Rahim here.I was wrting my statement of purpose.Please tell me how is it.





STATEMENT OF PURPOSE





Education and learning are a continuous journey of a discovery, which enables the development of a person’s capabilities as a complete individual, in a direction where his contributions and talents lie. It is very important therefore that a person be able to make the most of his formative years to attempt to realize what he has aptitude for.



Choosing Engineering was a natural consequence of my inclination towards Mathematics and Sciences as aptitude for. A strong urge to assimilate the fundamental concepts of any subject has enabled me to achieve an excellent academic record right from school. This choice was one I was always proud of, as it was a major stride I had taken in the process of learning to further my quest for acquiring knowledge in the field I desire to see myself in. It will provide me with opportunities I never knew existed. Aeronautical engineers are at the forefront of technology. Aerospace engineers create extraordinary machines, from airplanes that weigh over a half a million pounds to spacecraft that travel over 17,000 miles an hour. They design, develop, and test aircraft, spacecraft, and missiles and supervise the manufacture of these products.



In order to strike a balance between life and work, I engage myself in playing cricket. As a result I am very relaxed and I am able to maintain my composure at any point of time. I am systematic and hardworking and I always have the habit of planning ahead. In addition to person's efforts, facilities are necessary for people who would like to be successful. I look to undergraduate study to refine my knowledge in my area of interest. I believe it will also serve to give direction to my goal of a career to foresee myself as a top class specialist in the field of Aerospace Industry. I intend to pursue a Bachelor’s degree in Aeronautical Engineering in order to reach that goal. I believe that the broad overview of Mathematics and Sciences gained during intermediate studies can be consummated only by the in-depth knowledge that an undergraduate study will entail. My field or interest being a highly application oriented offers tremendous scope for development.



Some countries like may be as a singular opportunity for people who are looking for a better situation for their studies. I'm sure of my success in a country where I can do my researches and studies with good faculty who may help me very well. As I searched and found that is one of the best places to pursue BS in Aerospace Engineering. It will be a great opportunity for me if I can pursue my degree from your esteemed university.

I believe that I have the discipline, basic aptitude, perseverance and intellectual ability to pursue studies in the field of Aeronautical Engineering and I look forward to join as a freshman. I'm sure because I'm interested in this field very much, I'll do my best for it, and I can really sink my teeth into! I would be grateful if I were given an opportunity to discharge my best.





Sincerely,



(Rahim Lakhani)