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Mary was anxious, she was waiting with a will to Charly. He will go off the prison soon; time earlier, he worked like a sorceress, his boss pay to kill a man. As a result he was a sentence of ten years and conversely of his girlfriend, who stayed free. Mary spends money on lawyers; nevertheless, they could not do anything for him.
Now Mary and Charly still fall in love, but they have not money. Therefore, they designed a plan, this consist in doing a kidnapping.
First, they studied a family, where they can to demand a high ransom. Furthermore, the family can pay the rescue.
Second, the couple researched more people to help them, in addition that they were loyal and discreet
Also they prepared a hut where they hide with boy.
Meanwhile Mary finds the family, she was thinking about to have a baby, well, as she hoped so much time that Charly come back. Then she wished to become in the mother. Everybody was planning into the hut the kidnapping, they chose the son of a diplomatic senator. Afterwards Fredy and John went for the child at school and they moved to a hut.
Later in the news on tv the mother of the boy asks help to the authorities.
She received many calls; for example, calls of intimidation by kidnappers, calls of harassment by the press and calls of familiar people among them.
She has a tie very special of love with her son, because she cannot have more sons, consequently she just has one son his name is mike.
When the kidnappers arrived hut, Mary saw to mike and she will look after the kid likewise his mother will do it. Indeed, Mary was very fond of the boy. She was not bad. On the contrary she was affectionate and sensitive girl.
Then Mary commented whit Charly the idea to have a baby, unless otherwise agreed left free to child. Charly was taken aback by her negative and he said “ I do not like children and you know; anyway you want a baby, researched another man. After all Charly do not want sons.
Mary have not another alternative, with respect his interest for mike. Rather, convenience of money. Mary went to police and she demanded to Charly. In other words she also gave herself as an accomplice and handed over the other men for kidnapping.
In conclusion all of them caught by the police and they run a risk of a sentence of twenty years of prison and Mike was brought to his mother.