HI...I need some help on this very important letter, could you please help?

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00Je postule à un stage à Bangkok dans une organisation internationale, c'est une opportunité très importante pour moi, du coup je n'ai pas arrêté de retourner dans tous les sens ma cover letter, au point que j'ai peut-être voulu en faire trop dans la formulation, et sans doute fait pas mal de fautes de grammaires (surtout sur les prépositions, et autres...).02br
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00Je serais vraiment très reconnaissante à la personne qui accepterait d'y jeter un coup d'oeil histoire de corriger les erreurs d'anglais que j'ai pu faire, je suis ouverte aussi à toute proposition pour son amélioration. Mais c'est surtout d'une correction dont j'ai besoin car je sais que je n'obtiendrai jamais de stage si je n'envoie pas une lettre impeccable.02br
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00Merci d'avance02br
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00Sarah02br
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01del00j'en profite pour féliciter tous les volontaires de ce site, je trouve que votre démarche est vraiment formidable02del02br
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00Dear…02br
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00I write to you in order to postulate for an internship for the summer to come. I would sincerely like to have the possibility of working during several weeks within (nom de l’organisation) in particular in the fields of (domaines d'activités de l'organisation) *** or ***. I am indeed very interested by the international stakes which these fields represent, and I would like to benefit from the challenge and the undeniable experiment which would be granted to me while working in your organization.02br
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00As you can see it on my herewith enclosed resume, I am a French woman who graduate the University of the *** in Paris, with a DEA (Master) in international law, and I am currently enrolled in a Master of public international law at the University of Montreal, where I follow courses such as Law of minorities or Sovereignty and globalization, in which I lean more particularly on cultural diversity. I control the aspects as well private as public of the international law, but my competences do not limit to that. Indeed, during my various professional experiences, I acquired a great capacity of organization, work and implementation practical as of my knowledge: I had the chance to have been able to work as well in France, as in Turkey, in the USA and Peru, very often in team, which enabled me to acquire a great capacity of adaptation, initiative and opening.02br
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00I am ready to invest fully, I am not afraid to confront me with problems or new stakes, I will gain there on the contrary even more experiment and knowledge. I am certain to bring to you in return much of good mood and enthusiasm, but especially a true contribution to ***. If that is possible for you, I would like to make my internship for 8 weeks duration, from June 5 to July 28, but I remain opened to the possibility of other dates if those are not appropriate to you. 02br
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00Do not hesitate to contact me for any other information that would be necessary for you, 02br
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00Thank you in advance for the attention you will have agreed to give to me.02br
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00Sarah 0-