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Onelook Posted 7 years ago
Grammar

Highest point/location

The three when climbed to the top, offered the highest point in that part of the forest, offering the best view.


How can I reformulate the bolded part? Is there a better expression?

  

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The phrase is okay, but the sentence needs to be reworked. ], which, being the highest point in that part of the forest, offered the best view [of the surrounding area]. Clear?

  • The phrase is okay, but the sentence needs to be reworked.
  • ], which, being the highest point in that part of the forest, offered the best view [of the surrounding area].
  • Clear?
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The phrase is okay, but the sentence needs to be reworked. I would add some information as well as correct the grammar:

The three then climbed to the top [of the hill?], which, being the highest point in that part of the forest, offered the best view [of the surrounding area].

Clear?

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