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Mr. Tom Posted 16 years ago
Grammar

High up the dead body, vultures were circling fast.

Hi

Please tell me if these sentences are OK. Any suggestions are welcome.

High up the dead body, vultures were circling fast.

High above the dead body, vultures were circling fast.

High up, vultures were circling fast. [if the dead body is understood]

High above, vultures were circling fast.

Thanks,

Tom
  

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Hi, Please tell me if these sentences are OK. Any suggestions are welcome. High up the dead body, vultures were circling fast.

  • Hi, Please tell me if these sentences are OK.
  • Any suggestions are welcome.
  • High up the dead body, vultures were circling fast.
  • No.
  • 'High up a .
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Hi,

Please tell me if these sentences are OK. Any suggestions are welcome.

High up the dead body, vultures were circling fast.

No. 'High up a . . body' sounds like you are talking about eg the neck or head.

High above the dead body, vultures were circling fast. OK

High up, vultures were circling fast. Fine [if the dead

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