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Contiluo Posted 15 years ago
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High tech
Please check out the following sentences. Which is acceptable?
(1) At high-tech times, we live a comfortable life, but the sequel is violent competition.
(2) In high-tech times, we live comfortably, but along with it comes the fierce competition.
(3) In high-tech society, we live cozily, but it comes with ferocious competition.
(1) At high-tech times, we live a comfortable life, but the sequel is violent competition.
(2) In high-tech times, we live comfortably, but along with it comes the fierce competition.
(3) In high-tech society, we live cozily, but it comes with ferocious competition.
Top answer
Hi, Please check out the following sentences. Which is acceptable? Here are a few edits and suggestions.
- Hi, Please check out the following sentences.
- Which is acceptable?
- Here are a few edits and suggestions.
- The spelling is usually 'hi-tech'.
- The start of all these sentences sounds wrong to me, because it suggests that there have been several different and distinct times that can be described as hi-tech.
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Hi,
Please check out the following sentences. Which is acceptable? Here are a few edits and suggestions.
The spelling is usually 'hi-tech'.
The start of all these sentences sounds wrong to me, because it suggests that there have b
Please check out the following sentences. Which is acceptable? Here are a few edits and suggestions.
The spelling is usually 'hi-tech'.
The start of all these sentences sounds wrong to me, because it suggests that there have b
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