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John liao Posted 12 years ago
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high level to operation level
How do I say "in a company, from high level such as CEO to operation level such as clerk"? For example:
In Kiwi Auto Parts Ltd, from high level to operations level, different roles include CEO, Financial/HR Manager, Marketing Manager, are involved in information systems.
In Kiwi Auto Parts Ltd, from high level to operations level, different roles include CEO, Financial/HR Manager, Marketing Manager, are involved in information systems.
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I think "from senior level to operations level" is an improvement. The structure of the sentence as a whole is incorrect. Changing "include" to "including" would fix the main structural problem.
- I think "from senior level to operations level" is an improvement.
- The structure of the sentence as a whole is incorrect.
- Changing "include" to "including" would fix the main structural problem.
- The last two items in the comma separated list should be separated by "and".
- I question whether a "role" can be "involved in information systems".
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I think "from senior level to operations level" is an improvement.
The structure of the sentence as a whole is incorrect. Changing "include" to "including" would fix the main structural problem. The last two items in the comma separated list should be separated by "and". I question whether a "role" can be "involved in information systems".
The structure of the sentence as a whole is incorrect. Changing "include" to "including" would fix the main structural problem. The last two items in the comma separated list should be separated by "and". I question whether a "role" can be "involved in information systems".
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