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Anonymous Posted 5 years ago
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Hiding her reluctance
He takes a homemade sandwich wrapped in transparent film out of his schoolbag and hands it to the girl.
Girl: ...Thank you.
The girl unwraps the lukewarm sandwich and takes a bite of it, hiding her reluctance.
Is the underscored OK or would you write the whole sentence differently?
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anonymous Is the underscored OK or would you write the whole sentence differently? "
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anonymousIs the underscored OK or would you write the whole sentence differently?
It's OK, but I might make it "trying to hide her reluctance."
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