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0Should women quit work after having a child? This question has become a well-known issue in today’s society since more and more women refuse to be housewives, even after having a child. Traditionally, the husband goes to work and feeds his family while the wife stays at home, looking after their children. This family structure might be advantages to the growth of the children, because good parenting could possibly lead children to success and prevent them from harm. In addition, parents normally prefer to look after their children themselves since daycare services are always considered expensive and unreliable.02br
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00However, there are many reasons for women not to quit work after having a child. First, quitting work directly increases the financial pressure of a family, which may have negative impacts on each family member physically and mentally. Second, quitting work imposes women to be isolated from the work force. When women waste their intelligence on shopping for bargain food or daily groceries, they may lose the opportunity to enhance their working skills and communicate with the outside. Besides, instead of working for earning money, women start expecting too much of their children, wondering their next generations would have better lives than theirs, which may put too much pressures on both mothers and children. More importantly, the relationship between husbands and wives may degenerate since they start living in two different worlds. They might gradually have difficulties communicating with each other and this would become a very serious marriage issue.02br
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00Should women quit work after having a child? Even though there may be some advantages to stay at home and look after children, I think it is more important for women to keep part of their lives independently- keep working on their careers.0-