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Babyblue_girl08 Posted 18 years ago
Letter Writing
hi!can someone check this letter for me.
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02 br
00 First I would like to thank you for being good friends and always there when the time i need you. Wow! it been two year we didn't see each other. So how you been doing lately? How was your school doing for you? Well i decided to write you this letter to show how I'm feel for you. 02 br
00 I'm glad that I'am one of your friends. I know nowadays it kind of hard to friend like you. Wow I can't believe we been friends almost six years. I remember the entire thing we did in the passed years. I hope all the thing we has done before gonna happen to us again when we meet one day. You know I really missed you so bad, how i wish we can spend our time all day. 02 br
00 I hope you been doing well there and happy what you have now. I hope one day we can meet again or see each other in someday. I will jump of happiness if we meet and i have lots thing to tell you too. I know you want to see me too badly but we dont how we can meet. That why I alwasy told you just wait and see, our hope will come true. 02 br
00 This coming Valentine day I hope you have a wonderful day with your love one. I will really happy if I see you happy with your love one. On the Valentine day we should be happy and enjoy with our love one. Well hope you have a great day and take care always my friend. 02 br
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00 sincerely. 02 br
00 trixie 0-
01 font 00 hi there! this is my first time post here.. i need ur help to check my letter, i know it hundred mistake there. so i hope u guy can help me. thanks indvance. 02 font 02 h2
00 Dear ****, 02 br02 br
00 First I would like to thank you for being good friends and always there when the time i need you. Wow! it been two year we didn't see each other. So how you been doing lately? How was your school doing for you? Well i decided to write you this letter to show how I'm feel for you. 02 br
00 I'm glad that I'am one of your friends. I know nowadays it kind of hard to friend like you. Wow I can't believe we been friends almost six years. I remember the entire thing we did in the passed years. I hope all the thing we has done before gonna happen to us again when we meet one day. You know I really missed you so bad, how i wish we can spend our time all day. 02 br
00 I hope you been doing well there and happy what you have now. I hope one day we can meet again or see each other in someday. I will jump of happiness if we meet and i have lots thing to tell you too. I know you want to see me too badly but we dont how we can meet. That why I alwasy told you just wait and see, our hope will come true. 02 br
00 This coming Valentine day I hope you have a wonderful day with your love one. I will really happy if I see you happy with your love one. On the Valentine day we should be happy and enjoy with our love one. Well hope you have a great day and take care always my friend. 02 br
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00 sincerely. 02 br
00 trixie 0-
Top answer
0 Hi, Babyblue, 02 br 02 br 00 Here are my corrections. I don't claim they're perfect, but it's how I'd write. 01 blockquote 01 cite 10 babyblue_girl08 12 cite 12 br 11 h2 11 font 12 font 12 h2 10 Dear ****, 12 br 12 br 10 First 11 font 10 of all, 12 font 10 I would like to thank you for being good friends and always 11 del 10 there 12 del 10 11 font 10 beside 12 font 10 when 11 del 10 the time 12 del 10 11 font 10 I 12 font 10 need you.
- 0 Hi, Babyblue, 02 br 02 br 00 Here are my corrections.
- I don't claim they're perfect, but it's how I'd write.
- 01 blockquote 01 cite 10 babyblue_girl08 12 cite 12 br 11 h2 11 font 12 font 12 h2 10 Dear ****, 12 br 12 br 10 First 11 font 10 of all, 12 font 10 I would like to thank you for being good friends and always 11 del 10 there 12 del 10 11 font 10 beside 12 font 10 when 11 del 10 the time 12 del 10 11 font 10 I 12 font 10 need you.
- Wow!
- 11 font 10 I 12 font 10 t 11 font 10 is 12 font 10 11 del 10 been 12 del 10 two year 11 font 10 s 12 font 10 we 11 del 10 didn't see 12 del 10 11 font 10 haven't seen 12 font 10 each other.
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0 Hi, Babyblue, 02 br
02 br
00 Here are my corrections. I don't claim they're perfect, but it's how I'd write. 01 blockquote
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00 Here are my corrections. I don't claim they're perfect, but it's how I'd write. 01 blockquote
01 cite 10 babyblue_girl08 12 cite 12 br
11 h211 font 12 font 12 h2
10 Dear ****, 12 br
12 br
10 First 11 font 10 of all
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