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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
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Hi, Would you correct the following?
Would an expert please correct the following ?
1/She has a bigger part on the show toward the end of the show.
2/Her part gets bigger towards the end of the show.
3/The screenwriters work new characters into the script very smooth.
Thank you beforehand
1/She has a bigger part on the show toward the end of the show.
2/Her part gets bigger towards the end of the show.
3/The screenwriters work new characters into the script very smooth.
Thank you beforehand
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1. She has a bigger part in the show towards the end / She has a bigger part towards the end of the show [it sounds redundant to say "show" twice] 2. ") 3.
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- She has a bigger part in the show towards the end / She has a bigger part towards the end of the show [it sounds redundant to say "show" twice] 2.
- ") 3.
- The screenwriters work new characters into the script very smoothly.
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1. She has a bigger part in the show towards the end / She has a bigger part towards the end of the show [it sounds redundant to say "show" twice] 2. Her part/role gets more time/more important towards the end of the show (which do you mean by "bigger?") 3. The screenwriters work new characters into the script very smoothly.
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