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Tran thi Posted 8 years ago
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Hi, this is my short raport about interior design project. I oftens have problems with awk and fragments. Can someone check it for me. And if you have any ideas, can share with me. Thnk you

To: Asian design company in Vancouver

From: Steven Tran

Date:

Subject: DESIGN THE ROOM FOR CHILDREN


This report summarizes my research on the specialized field of design room for children. With years of experience in the field of interior design, I believe that focus on the design of the private room for children will attract more customers and bring tremendous profits to our company.

Nowadays, many Asian families do not want their children to have a private room because they afraid children will not listen to them or they want to take care of them very carefully. However, it does make children feel uncomfortable, and they often depend on their parent rather than doing everything by themselves. Laurie (2017) stated that having a private room built not only the responsibility but also trust between them and parents. Although having a separate room for children is very important, there are not many companies specialized in child room design.

I have researched the different websites of designing rooms for children, and I suggest our company need to take a careful look at this project in the future. I have found three areas that I recommend our firm concentrate on:

  • Floor design
  • Choosing color
  • Decorating
  1. Floor design:

The first attention in the design of the children's bedroom is the selection of materials for the floor. Because of the child's hyperactivity, we need to focus on choosing soft and spongy materials to protect them. There are two types of materials very useful for this project: Carpet and cork.

  1. Carpet

Carpets can be made on a loom like a woven fabric, made of knotted ties, piles made of linen, wool and cotton, or embroidery. The mats are used for a variety of purposes, including the insulation of the human foot from the cold floor or concrete floor. This material makes children feel comfortable when sitting on the floor, reducing the sound when walking, create an ambiance of warm for the bedroom.

  1. Cork

Cork is the modern flooring ideas which are perfect for comfortable bedroom design. Cork can help to make a bedroom feel luxuriously relaxing, as the floor rises to cradle each step you take. At the same time, the cork itself is filled with millions of tiny air bubbles, which serve to protect the room against both heat and clamor. Cork is a relatively unusual flooring material, widely available.

  1. Choosing color

Color can motivate, energize, relieve, recuperate and indeed disturbing. This is particularly true for children, who can be additional delicate to color's effect. So, the significance of picking out fair the correct color for a youthful children’s room shouldn't be underestimated. There are many colors suitable for children’s room, such as red, orange, green, yellow-green, violet, or combine many different colors to create the vitality. Figure 1 below shows an example of forceful bedroom.

Figure 1: Warm Color for kid’s bedroom

Source: Color for bedroom by HomesFeed




Combine the colors in Figure 1 not only gives the room warmth, but it also makes more vivid. The use of numerous colors will encourage confidence, extraversion, and independence for the children.

  1. Decorating

Decoration plays a significant role in whether the children likes the room. Room decoration with many catching objects will make the children appreciate when entering the room. Peel-and-stick decals are a perfect way to decorate the walls in your child’s bedroom, especially if you rent and can’t paint. Decals with superheroes, princesses, or the prices in animated films will provide joyfully and lively. As children grows older, it’s easy to remove the decals and replace them with something else. Other ways to express your personality and style at home is through a collection of pictures or drawings.

  1. Conclusion and Recommended Actions

As my research shows, design a beautiful room for children make them feel comfortable, and developing the imagination of the children.

I recommend that KIMBO Design do the following:

  1. Cooperate with specialized furniture companies to provide the best products to the clients.
  2. We need to post ads to introduce the upcoming project to the clients.






  

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You leave out words that are necessary for understanding the sentence.


Subject: DESIGN THE ROOM FOR CHILDREN


Describe the process: Designing a room for children
Presenting one design: A Room Design for Children


This report summarizes my research on the specialized field of design room designs

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Hi this my rewrite about the designing room for children. I already fixed some problems. Can you check it again and write for me some comments. Also, I changed the introduction. Thank you so much


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This report analyzes the importance of having a private and some steps to design a room for children. Having a private room will give your children the i

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