Hi teachers would you plz check my cover lettre :)

I am writing to you to express my deep interest in MBA in XXX at XXX university Germany for the winter intake 2016 . this program has interested me because of its international background, its location and its course syllabus which combined between the main theme of a traditional MBA with a specialization in management of the environment and resources , Pursuing an MBA was always a dream form me and this become my objective since I heard about this program which fulfills all my expectations

I will be graduating in july 2016 from XXX university with a diploma majoring in industrial engineering, my studies have assisted me in gaining relevant technical skills and I had the opportunity to familiarize with several topics related to management and economy like production management, total quality management, supply chain management, finance and management control. I also had some subjects related to management of environment , in addition to my studies I have done an internship for 4 months in field of quality management and I’m actually doing my project graduation which will last for 4 months in field of security management .

My studies in the preparatory classes for engineering schools has given a strong foundation to my analytical skills , my studies of industrial engineering gave me a background of management , i held an IELTS 6.0 which attests to the good knowledge of the English language written and spoken , I also studied German for 11 months which will help me communicate in daily life I consider myself qualified for pursuing my studies for the MBA and feel completely comfortable with the different courses teached and assignments I will have to pass during my studies in Germany and assure that I will do my best to meet the expectations of the allocated spots