Hi, teachers. Please check my dialog.

Hi, teachers. Please check my dialog. Is it correct and natural to you or does anything bother you about it? Thanks.

Guy1: I know things are still hard for you because of what happened, but are you going to keep letting it drag you down or are you going to try to do something about it instead of feeling sorry for yourself?

Guy2: (sarcastic) I appreciate the support.

Guy1: You don't think I've tried to be supportive? I'm still trying to be supportive, but you're making it very hard.