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TOPIC: The charts below show the reasons why undergraduates and postgraduates choose to go to Parker University. (Ielts writing task 1)

The graphs below illustrate the motives why undergraduate and postgraduate students select Parker University for their study.

Overall, it can be clearly seen that reputation of university holds the largest share of reasons for students to choose Parker University. By contrast, availability of accommodation, location and others are not popular reasons at all for both types of students to go to Parker, however, undergraduates prefer recommodation more than the other students do.

As we can see, reputation is the most common reason for undergraduates and postgraduates to choose university with the rate of one third and close to one half, respectively. Cost comes the second popular, representing nearly a quarter of the total for undergraduates and one in three for postgraduates. Nevertheless, there is the same percentage of personal recommodation, location and others consider of the total (6%) as a reason of postgraduates to choose their university. Besides, personal recommodation holds a large share of undergraduates motives at the rate of 18%, whereas, other reasons of these students are almost the same (8%).