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Task 2: Some people think that governments should ban dangerous sports, while others think people should have freedom to do any sports or activity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In my society, adventurous sprots are important to people, while governments think that dangerous sports are forbidden, others believe that any sports or activity must be freedom in their life.

On the one hand, there are people who believe dangerous sports which change their life. Because, people feel many emotions when they play it such as happiness, scare, and worry they do not need potential limit of themselves, so they can reduce stress from working environment, the society, and their family. According to researches, who interview other peoples during 30 to 70 age from adventurous sports which varity their life both mental and healthy.

On the other hand, it is thought that government treat to their community that risk sports threaten to people live. To illustrates, people like to calm rock mountain, which sport is dangerous the best in the world. If they do not have tools, experience, and daring in sport whoever can be death wherever in the mountain. Secondly, government afraid that people will be waste money for sports which can divest their life anytime. For instance, peole play parachute who can buy many devices protecting which are more expensive than other devices in household.

In my opinion, i believe that dangerous sports both negative and benefit, but i think more negative than positive. Therefore, people should think certainly for their determine playing sports such as finances and spirits before they play adventurous sports.