Hi teacher. Please help me make this sound as natural as possible.
The small man tried to break the lock off the door but couldn't, so the big man pushed him aside, pulled his shotgun, and fired at the lock. Then knocked it off with the handle of the shotgun.
Hi teachers. Please help me make this sound as natural as possible.
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The wimpy guy tried with all his might to break the lock off the door, but failed to do so. His brawny compadre pushed him aside, pulled out his 12-gauge shotgun, and blasted the lock, shattering it. He knocked off its remains with the stock of his gun.
- The wimpy guy tried with all his might to break the lock off the door, but failed to do so.
- His brawny compadre pushed him aside, pulled out his 12-gauge shotgun, and blasted the lock, shattering it.
- He knocked off its remains with the stock of his gun.
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The wimpy guy tried with all his might to break the lock off the door, but failed to do so. His brawny compadre pushed him aside, pulled out his 12-gauge shotgun, and blasted the lock, shattering it. He knocked off its remains with the stock of his gun.
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