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The chart below shows the GDP growth per year for three countries between 2007 and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart illustrates three countries ( Tunisia, Japan and Ecuador ) develop GDP in 3 years from 2007 to 2010.

Overall, it is clear that the annual GDP growth of Tunisia decreased, while it increased remarkably in Japan, except GDP of Ecuador saw fluctuate over the given period.

In 2007, GDP development of Tunisia was the highest over 6% in three countries, this number was three time as the number of Japan, and double that of Ecuador. However, there was a slight decline in GDP of Tunisia per year, and which fell at 3% the last year. On the other hand, at 2% in 2007, this proportion rose steadily to reach at 6.5% in 2010, which demonstrate that GDP of Japan was the highest over period.

GDP growth of Ecuador started over 3% the first year, and increased almost 5% in 2008. Unfortunately, this proportion fell at 1.1% in 2009 after that increasing double GDP the last year.

  

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The bar chart illustrates three countries ( Tunisia, Japan and Ecuador ) develop GDP in 3 years from 2007 to 2010. (improper sentence structure. There are two main verbs, but only one subject.

  • The bar chart illustrates three countries ( Tunisia, Japan and Ecuador ) develop GDP in 3 years from 2007 to 2010.
  • (improper sentence structure.
  • There are two main verbs, but only one subject.
  • A noun cannot be both a direct object and a subject at the same time.
  • ) remarkably in Japan, except (missing word) GDP of Ecuador saw fluctuate (not a valid verb phrase.
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The bar chart illustrates three countries ( Tunisia, Japan and Ecuador ) develop GDP in 3 years from 2007 to 2010. (improper sentence structure. There are two main verbs, but only one subject. A noun cannot be both a direct object and a subject at the same time. )

Overall, it is clea

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