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Topic: The charts show the sources of the electricity produced in 4 countries between 2003 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts illustrate the percentage of the electricity is manufactured by four countries ( India, Sweden, Morocco, and Vietnam ) from 2003 to 2008.
At first glance, it is clear that the resource of fossil fuel is produced by Vietnam and Indian. Whereas, hydropower is the principal source of the electricity in Sweden and Morocco.
In term of Indian and Vietnam, the rate of fossil fuel accounted at 56 % and 82% respectively, while 44% hydropower is produced in Vietnam, this percentage is larger than 14% in India. Unfortunately, Vietnam did not have conditions to manufacture nuclear power, whereas Indian recorded a small minority of electricity produced from this sources.
In Morocco, the overwhelming majority sources are hydropower, which dominated at 95%. However, the rate of hydropower produced just over fifth and having the advantage to manufacture significantly nuclear power ( 44% ). Both Morocco and Sweden have a very small percentage of fossil fuel resource.