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In many countries, children are becoming overweight and unhealthy. Some people think that the government should have the responsibility. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Over in the world, some people worry about that childhood obesity and unhealth are becoming popularly other housholds, and they think that the government should have responsibility for their children. I partly agree with this opinion.

On the one hand, the government should contribute other parks to execrise for children. Because, many countries in the world, the government invest too much construction such as building, tennis course, and restaurent, so they forget the main purpose of construction for citizen, especially that is children. Furthermore, the responsibility of government that reduce some fast food shops in public. In fact, the reason of childhood obesity who eat too much fast foods, so it is unsure for healthy children.

On the other hand, the parents will treat better their children, if they do not want to their children become overweight. Normally, some parents often do not care to nutrient diet of their kid, for they spend a lot of time for working. Therefore, they should select good diet for children such as drinking grain which add many nutrients the same as meals, or parents choose healthy eating that contain less sugar, and fat. Secondly, in the weekend, parent should offer their kid go to park, and encourage regular execrise. To illustrates, the parents can direct lesson execrise, and do together, so their children feel happier and happier just like sitting in sofa to playing game.

In conclusion, children are becoming overweight and unhealthy which become important issue, so both parents and governments should treat to children who is country future.