HI! pls correct my SP and give me ur ideas about better ways.

i tryed to get ur help before but no one helped me so i ask again.pls, its urgent .

Statement of Purpose



It was time when the began its painful transformation into the democratic countries; the time, full of revolutionary events and ideas, hopes and expectations for a new life after crush of communism. Conceptions, opinions and ideas, freedom of speech created favorable mental atmosphere, which inevitably stimulated my interest in Democracy, Freedom and aspiration for cognition. Soon my interest became more concrete. My decision to become a diplomat, expert in the sphere of foreign policy, followed logically the desire to grasp the meaning of the freedom of speech and the perspectives of democracy using experience of advanced countries.

Entering the department of International Relations and European studies at (in my native city) was the first important step in my life. But after the first year of studies I realized that «wind of change» didn’t influence wrong approach to education. At this time I have chosen the opinion of English philosopher Joseph Priestly as my motto: «We have to make our lives ourselves. Inspired by the idea, I decided to do the next important step in my career: to be stronger and stay far from bribery in the corrupted educational world.

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In the fourth course I passed successful exam as one of 10 best students among 150 students for having internship at the Ministry of foreign Affairs where seriousness, political literacy were required. Due to my additional knowledge of Persian language, gained at primary school I was appointed to the Department of East. Practicing all the theories there, gained at the university gave me good opportunity to impress my skills. Access to the numerous source of information regarding ’s foreign policy, helped me to form complete notions about regimes and democracy, dependence and freedom.



I believe that life is not just about sitting and planning rather it is more importantly, about going out and implementing. My education and working experience gave me chance to understand my real vocation. Working at several positions I have realized that my skills need further improvement in order to facilitate local non-government or governmental organizations and help strengthen the development process. My purpose for seeking a Master’s degree XXX is to develop talent to lead, manage, analyze, negotiate and make a difference in political and social aspects of development process.



The need of the professionals who are true democrats - freethinkers who have to facilitate a radical change in the way of democratic development is looked upon today. Despite the fact, that there are significant changes in the development process of ***, the main problem existing in our reality is the result of isolation from developing world while communism, the old habit to worship to the authority .Working for two years at NGO (???)Organization I experienced a lot in starting and developing process in our country. All these facts prompt me to learn about ways to prevent types of problems.



I decide to focus my studies on Human Rights in order to equip myself with tools I would need to make a real contribution. Despite my experience, I still lack some important knowledge and leadership skills. The fact that more than 50% LLM students come from developing countries ensures me that the class discussions will focus on the problems faced by developing countries. The LLM program is the perfect opportunity for increasing my theoretical and practical knowledge by interacting with my classmates.



LLM will help me strengthen skills necessary to secure a leading position and will prepare me to accomplish my long-term ambition of building NGO, consulting group in our region, focused on Human Rights aspects mainly. By developing and maximizing my knowledge LLM will allow me to make concrete steps in the development process of my region and my country.