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David pulls into a diner near a freeway entrance at the outskirts of the city.
David pulls into a diner at the outskirts of the city near a freeway entrance.
At the outskirts of the city, David pulls into a diner near a freeway entrance.
- What would be the more natural way to structure this, do you think?
- Would you include "located" after diner in any of the three suggestions?
- Are the prepositions correct?
Top answer
anonymous David pulls into a diner near a freeway entrance at the outskirts of the city. A freeway entrance is usually called an on ramp. If we already know there's a freeway, use that.
- anonymous David pulls into a diner near a freeway entrance at the outskirts of the city.
- A freeway entrance is usually called an on ramp.
- If we already know there's a freeway, use that.
- "Near" is too imprecise for description.
- "By" or "across from" or something would be better.
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anonymousDavid pulls into a diner near a freeway entrance at the outskirts of the city.
A freeway entrance is usually called an on ramp. If we already know there's a freeway, use that. "Near" is too imprecise for description. "By" or "across from" or something would be better. It's "on" the outskirts.
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