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Pakee Posted 11 years ago
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Hi. Is this correct? She finds her job multifaceted , because you never know how many people you need to interact with.
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pakee She finds her job multifaceted , because you never know how many people you need to interact with. That is not a very good example of 'multifaceted', I think, and the presentation is a bit odd in the change of person. I suggest: She finds her job interesting because she interacts with many different people.
- pakee She finds her job multifaceted , because you never know how many people you need to interact with.
- That is not a very good example of 'multifaceted', I think, and the presentation is a bit odd in the change of person.
- I suggest: She finds her job interesting because she interacts with many different people.
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pakee She finds her job multifaceted , because you never know how many people you need to interact with.That is not a very good example of 'multifaceted', I think, and the presentation is a bit odd in the change of person. I suggest:
She finds her job interesting because she interacts with many different people.
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The change from "she" to "you" is offputting.
You should never put a space before a comma.
You should never put a space before a comma.
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Mister Micawber pakee She finds her job multifaceted , because you never know how many people you need to interact with.That is not a very good example of 'multifaceted', I think, and the presentation is a bit odd in the change of person. I suggest: She finds her job interesting because she interacts with many different people.Thank You. But I mean her job ma
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pakeeBut I mean her job many-sided. Not just intereatingMeeting different people does not make a job many-sided. 'Multifaceted' is an inappropriate word choice in my estimation.
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