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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
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hi please correct this sentences for me.Thank you guys

My teach said i need to use stronger words for " got and go", but i couldnt think of one. Can u guys fix this for me? thankz a lot.

After I got well again, we began to go to beaches , visit my mother's hometown in North Vietnam, which has the most beautiful sceneries in my country.
  

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Hi, My teach said i need to use stronger words for " got and go", but i couldnt think of one. Can u guys fix this for me? thankz a lot.

  • Hi, My teach said i need to use stronger words for " got and go", but i couldnt think of one.
  • Can u guys fix this for me?
  • thankz a lot.
  • After I got well again, we began to go to beaches , visit my mother's hometown in North Vietnam, which has the most beautiful sceneries in my country.
  • Maybe this.
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Hi,

My teach said i need to use stronger words for " got and go", but i couldnt think of one. Can u guys fix this for me? thankz a lot.

After I got well again, we began to go to beaches , visit my mother's hometown in North Vietnam, which has the most beautiful sceneries in my country.

Maybe this.

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Thanz Clive a lot..hehe

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