Hi, Please correct me

Hi,



I am started filling my Appraisal form since I have to submit very soon.

Please help me anyone, correct my words

Here I have posted the sentence which needs to verify & correct,

Best achievements

What achievement during the past one year you are most proud of?



Actively participated and successfully completed the new monitoring tool evaluation project.



Within the short period of time I have completed adding all the EMEA Servers in BPM Portal.



Coordinated with the SD team in closing the User administration Cases & Tasks within the SLA.



I have performed DK mailbox movement activities.





Cooperation within the department

In what way does cooperation within your department and with other departments affect your handling of Tasks?



I am maintaining good working relationships with all members in my department as well as other department which had helped me to render good support to end users.



On a scale from 1 to 5, 1 being extremely bad and 5 being extremely good, how is the cooperation within the department?



1 2 3 4 5

Reason:

I had adhere to closing the incident and task within SLA by maintain good rapport with my department members and also with other department members.



What will be your contribution to the cooperation within the department in the coming period?



Organizing frequent knowledge transfer sessions for our team members to have a better knowledge sharing within us.

My contribution would be to reducing the incident and task to achieve zero down time in server operations.





How can your manager and colleagues contribute to improve cooperation in the coming period?



Conducting discussions and organize training regularly to improve the quality and standard of the IT support.