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BITASHIRAZI Posted 11 years ago
Letter Writing

Hi please check the grammar for me. Dose it sounds ok?

Hi dear XXX
As an intern optician I had an interview with you and you told me I will have another interview with the owner; still I have not received any email or call, I discovered I missed some emails in my spam box. I see your locations are busy and I am looking for a serious job to work hard, I would be grateful to have the opportunity to have another interview with you.
  

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BITASHIRAZI Hi dear *** No, not "Hi dear" That is a greeting for your mother or best friend, not for business. Dear Mr. Forrester, BITASHIRAZI I discovered I missed some emails in my spam box.

— AlpheccaStars

  • BITASHIRAZI Hi dear *** No, not "Hi dear" That is a greeting for your mother or best friend, not for business.
  • Dear Mr.
  • Forrester, BITASHIRAZI I discovered I missed some emails in my spam box.
  • Did any of these emails invite you for a second interview?
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BITASHIRAZIHi dear ***
No, not "Hi dear" That is a greeting for your mother or best friend, not for business.

Dear Mr. Forrester,
BITASHIRAZI I discovered I missed some emails in my spam box.
Did any of these emails invite you for a second interview?
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Thank you Alphecca Stars
I"m not sure about my spams, that is why I mention it to her to let her know.
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BITASHIRAZII"m not sure about my spams, that is why I mention it to her to let her know.
Did you notice any emails from them in your spam folder?
If not, I would not mention your spam folder.
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