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Brentlopez001 Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

hi, please check if the below sentences are ok.

Please see the attached invoice for your perusal and necessary action.
The remaining item will be shipped once we received our order.
  

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It is far too wordy, Brent. Be brief, clear and direct: Please see the attached invoice. The remaining item will be shipped once we have received our order.

— Mister Micawber

  • It is far too wordy, Brent.
  • Be brief, clear and direct: Please see the attached invoice.
  • The remaining item will be shipped once we have received our order.
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It is far too wordy, Brent. Be brief, clear and direct:

Please see the attached invoice. The remaining item will be shipped once we have received our order.
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