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Simpleibr Posted 8 years ago
Letter Writing

Hi! please anyone here can revise my letter. Thanks

Dear Sir,

I would like to request you to kindly give us if there is any update regarding the complaint of Grade 4 Student, ******** against with 2 students in ASIP, period, as you mentioned in Daily Report No. 92 dated 23 October 2018/page 1, result of your investigation was the complainant didn’t recognize the 2 bullied student.


We hope to see an immediate action in this matter.

  

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Dear Sir, I would like to request that you to kindly give inform us if there is any update regarding the complaint of Grade 4 Student, ******** against with 2 two students in ASIP. , period, A s you mentioned in the Daily Report No. 92 dated 23 October 201 8, page 1, the result of your investigation was the complainant didn’t recognize the two bullied studen ts.

  • Dear Sir, I would like to request that you to kindly give inform us if there is any update regarding the complaint of Grade 4 Student, ******** against with 2 two students in ASIP.
  • , period, A s you mentioned in the Daily Report No.
  • 92 dated 23 October 201 8, page 1, the result of your investigation was the complainant didn’t recognize the two bullied studen ts.
  • We hope to see an immediate action in on this matter.
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Dear Sir,

I would like to request that you to kindly give inform us if there is any update regarding the complaint of Grade 4 Student, ******** against with 2 two students in ASIP. , period,

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. . . the complainant didn’t recognize the 2 bullied students.

This is incorrect. You don't understand what the terms bully and bullied mean.

The complainant is the bullied student.

The two students are the two bullies, (or the two alleged bullies if their guilt has not yet been proven).

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