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A.Kirkling Posted 15 years ago
Dear Office of Student Financial Aid,
My name is Angelina Kirkling and I am writing to appeal my hold on financial aid.
the spring semester was a very overwhelming and stressful time in my life .I am fully aware of
not attend classes regular and balancing my personal life with school resulted and dropping my classes I take full responsibility for my actions. Being a new student I was so excited about returning back to school after being out for 4years, I did not efficiently plan my personal life around school . Doing the time I was unemployed looking for work I have two kids that’s was not attending daycare at the time because I could not afford it. , getting to school wasn’t a problem for me because its was a 15 min walk from my home. I did not have transportation and had problems getting my kids to their babysitter their dad wasn’t able to keep them because he has all was worked flexiable hours I had no family and closing living range to help me .Doing the time of trying to manage babysitting and school I was offered a job which I was in no position to turn down . Their was only one income coming in to support my family’s living stability. My time was consumed with taking care of personal issues and overwhelming stress of balancing my issues out I decided to drop my classes and plan for the next school year. Now that I’m have learned that their has to be future planned balance I am ready for spring 2012 . I haven’t took the following step to prepare for a better school year .
1.I Applied for financial aid
2.I Put in my classes and set babysitting arrangements 2 months before spring semester start.
3.Meet and talk with my professor about what is require to succeed and their classes.
4. I have transportation for both me and my children .
5. I have informed my employer to adjust my schedule by keep all morning open for school
6. I have prepared a list of books and essentials needed for each of my classes.
Unfortunately I will not be able to attend school as planned without the help of the financial aid
I have made mistakes and the past and ready to look towards my future I really need your help
I’m sincerely sorry for abusing your help.
Thank you,
Angelina Kirkling
© 2011 Grammarly, Inc.
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HI IM WRITING THIS IM MY APPEAL LETTER TO FINANCIL AID CAN SOMEONE PROOFREAD IT FOR ME LET ME KNOW WHAT YOU THINK THANKS
Dear Office of Student Financial Aid,
My name is Angelina Kirkling and I am writing to appeal my hold on financial aid.
the spring semester was a very overwhelming and stressful time in my life .I am fully aware of
not attend classes regular and balancing my personal life with school resulted and dropping my classes I take full responsibility for my actions. Being a new student I was so excited about returning back to school after being out for 4years, I did not efficiently plan my personal life around school . Doing the time I was unemployed looking for work I have two kids that’s was not attending daycare at the time because I could not afford it. , getting to school wasn’t a problem for me because its was a 15 min walk from my home. I did not have transportation and had problems getting my kids to their babysitter their dad wasn’t able to keep them because he has all was worked flexiable hours I had no family and closing living range to help me .Doing the time of trying to manage babysitting and school I was offered a job which I was in no position to turn down . Their was only one income coming in to support my family’s living stability. My time was consumed with taking care of personal issues and overwhelming stress of balancing my issues out I decided to drop my classes and plan for the next school year. Now that I’m have learned that their has to be future planned balance I am ready for spring 2012 . I haven’t took the following step to prepare for a better school year .
1.I Applied for financial aid
2.I Put in my classes and set babysitting arrangements 2 months before spring semester start.
3.Meet and talk with my professor about what is require to succeed and their classes.
4. I have transportation for both me and my children .
5. I have informed my employer to adjust my schedule by keep all morning open for school
6. I have prepared a list of books and essentials needed for each of my classes.
Unfortunately I will not be able to attend school as planned without the help of the financial aid
I have made mistakes and the past and ready to look towards my future I really need your help
I’m sincerely sorry for abusing your help.
Thank you,
Angelina Kirkling
© 2011 Grammarly, Inc.
Top answer
Hello Angelina; You have had many obstacles and difficulties in your life, and I hope you will get the financial aid so you can to go back to school. But I notice by your writing that you need more practice to get comfortable with using college-level academic English. Perhaps you could do some independent study on grammar, vocabulary and composition.
- Hello Angelina; You have had many obstacles and difficulties in your life, and I hope you will get the financial aid so you can to go back to school.
- But I notice by your writing that you need more practice to get comfortable with using college-level academic English.
- Perhaps you could do some independent study on grammar, vocabulary and composition.
- Here at English Forums, we have very nice volunteer teachers who will support you in learning to write compositions and essays.
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Hello Angelina;
You have had many obstacles and difficulties in your life, and I hope you will get the financial aid so you can to go back to school. But I notice by your writing that you need more practice to get comfortable with using college-level academic English. Perhaps you could do some independent study on grammar, vocabulary and composition.
Here at English Forums, we
You have had many obstacles and difficulties in your life, and I hope you will get the financial aid so you can to go back to school. But I notice by your writing that you need more practice to get comfortable with using college-level academic English. Perhaps you could do some independent study on grammar, vocabulary and composition.
Here at English Forums, we
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