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Suyoung Posted 22 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Hi i'm suyoung
hi i'm suyoung . it'll be glad to check error in my essay : )
and plz visit my website
senini.cafe24.com
thanks ! : )
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original essay
it has been almost 1year work in this company
i think it is time to think my job and future.
i hope to develope my language ability(especially japanese, china) and human network
also i hope to meet many people who success and hav good ablity
but it's better he has passion to his life.
and i also want to be a that person
.
and plz visit my website
senini.cafe24.com
thanks ! : )
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original essay
it has been almost 1year work in this company
i think it is time to think my job and future.
i hope to develope my language ability(especially japanese, china) and human network
also i hope to meet many people who success and hav good ablity
but it's better he has passion to his life.
and i also want to be a that person
.
Top answer
I'd revise your essay like this: "Original Essay It has been almost one year that I have worked for this company, and I think it is time to think about my career and my future. I hope to develop my language ability (especially my Japanese and Chinese) and human networking abilities. I also hope to meet many people who have succeeded and have good abilities, or, even better, have passion in their lives.
- I'd revise your essay like this: "Original Essay It has been almost one year that I have worked for this company, and I think it is time to think about my career and my future.
- I hope to develop my language ability (especially my Japanese and Chinese) and human networking abilities.
- I also hope to meet many people who have succeeded and have good abilities, or, even better, have passion in their lives.
- " Hope this helps.
- Now I'll go and look at your website.
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I'd revise your essay like this:
"Original Essay
It has been almost one year that I have worked for this company, and I think it is time to think about my career and my future. I hope to develop my language ability (especially my Japanese and Chinese) and human networking abilities. I also hope to meet many people who have succeeded and have good abilities, or, even better, h
"Original Essay
It has been almost one year that I have worked for this company, and I think it is time to think about my career and my future. I hope to develop my language ability (especially my Japanese and Chinese) and human networking abilities. I also hope to meet many people who have succeeded and have good abilities, or, even better, h
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hi i'm suyoung : )
really nice of you . thanks for your teaching. : )
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and as you know i hav two website.
one is senini.cafe24.com
the other is www.suyoung.ye.ro (korean)
you can leave a message "blah-blah-blah "category (left side) of my website
take c
really nice of you . thanks for your teaching. : )
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and as you know i hav two website.
one is senini.cafe24.com
the other is www.suyoung.ye.ro (korean)
you can leave a message "blah-blah-blah "category (left side) of my website
take c
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