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Tsegi Posted 16 years ago
Letter Writing
Hi i'm just new here ,I'm trying to write english profiency letter please make correction and advance on the letter thank you so much
Dear Sir/Madam
My name is ......... and I respectfully request consideration for review of my case regarding ..... citinzenship, specially concerning my English language proficiency.
English is the most widely spoken language in the world and has more second-language speakers than any other language.It is also the language of the Internet,and so studing, doing research, ineracting with international companies and travelling is almost immpossible without at least some English.
English has been a big part of my life since secondry school.I was given many colorful children's books in English and found them fascinating.As the English language becomes more and more of an international language , may need to understund information and to be able to communicate also increases.
To improve my English skills, I studied at the Institute of English in San Francisco,CA.It is splendid opportunity to make new friends, to see a different vision of life and step by step coming in the top .
In my opinion,process of learning English , most learners said that listening and speaking were the most important skills.In addition, these two subjects were interesting to be studied .
I have been employed as a restaurant manager at the ....... Hotel in ........ for the past five years.The majority of our clients are English- speaking tourists.One of the most important aspects of accommodating our guests and providing excellent service is to be able to communicate in English.
In 2005, I have taken the Toefl examination with above average result and received a certificate with a 520/TWE-4 score achievement,which helped me to boost my English even further more .
Though my score in English was less than what I hoped for , because of my son he ‘s been ill recently and that distracted me greatly from my English studies and I believe my score was adversely affected by my personal life.
Sincerely yours
Ts
My name is ......... and I respectfully request consideration for review of my case regarding ..... citinzenship, specially concerning my English language proficiency.
English is the most widely spoken language in the world and has more second-language speakers than any other language.It is also the language of the Internet,and so studing, doing research, ineracting with international companies and travelling is almost immpossible without at least some English.
English has been a big part of my life since secondry school.I was given many colorful children's books in English and found them fascinating.As the English language becomes more and more of an international language , may need to understund information and to be able to communicate also increases.
To improve my English skills, I studied at the Institute of English in San Francisco,CA.It is splendid opportunity to make new friends, to see a different vision of life and step by step coming in the top .
In my opinion,process of learning English , most learners said that listening and speaking were the most important skills.In addition, these two subjects were interesting to be studied .
I have been employed as a restaurant manager at the ....... Hotel in ........ for the past five years.The majority of our clients are English- speaking tourists.One of the most important aspects of accommodating our guests and providing excellent service is to be able to communicate in English.
In 2005, I have taken the Toefl examination with above average result and received a certificate with a 520/TWE-4 score achievement,which helped me to boost my English even further more .
Though my score in English was less than what I hoped for , because of my son he ‘s been ill recently and that distracted me greatly from my English studies and I believe my score was adversely affected by my personal life.
Sincerely yours
Ts
Top answer
I have assumed that you want the letter in American English, so have left the spellings in the American. There were a few spelling mistakes, or possibly typing errors, which I have corrected. I have also taken the liberty of re-phrasing your final paragraph and a couple of other small alterations within the text.
- I have assumed that you want the letter in American English, so have left the spellings in the American.
- There were a few spelling mistakes, or possibly typing errors, which I have corrected.
- I have also taken the liberty of re-phrasing your final paragraph and a couple of other small alterations within the text.
- I am not quite certain whhat you mean when you use the phrase "step by step coming in top", so have left this unamended.
- I hope this helps and good luck.
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I have assumed that you want the letter in American English, so have left the spellings in the American. There were a few spelling mistakes, or possibly typing errors, which I have corrected. I have also taken the liberty of re-phrasing your final paragraph and a couple of other small alterations within the text. I am not quite certain whhat you mean when you use the phrase "step by step coming i
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