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During my studies I developed a deep passion for physics, which together with hard work and persistence was crucial in order to reach all my academic goals. "
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a22s Hi, I want to ask to all of you if the following sentence is correct. During my studies I developed a deep passion for physics, which together with hard work and persistence was crucial in order to reach all my academic goals. It's correct, but on the other hand, it seems a little too long and dense, as if you are trying to say everything at once.
- a22s Hi, I want to ask to all of you if the following sentence is correct.
- During my studies I developed a deep passion for physics, which together with hard work and persistence was crucial in order to reach all my academic goals.
- It's correct, but on the other hand, it seems a little too long and dense, as if you are trying to say everything at once.
- CJ
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a22sHi, I want to ask to all of you if the following sentence is correct.
During my studies I developed a deep passion for physics, which together with hard work and persistence was crucial in order to reach all my academic goals.
It's correct, but on the other hand, it seems a little too long and dense, as if you are trying to say everything at once.
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