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The title of my book is Labor of Love by Rachel Hawthorne. This is a very interesting book about a group of high school teens going to New Orleans to help repair houses that were destroyed by hurricanes. New Orleans has much to offer from its delicious food, its many tourist spots, to its many mysteries of the psychic within the city. These teenagers go through it all on their trip.
op to get a physic reading. The physic, named Saraphina told Dawn, “I see a very messy place. Broken. Boards and shingles… things hidden.” “I hear hammering,” she continued.” “You’re trying to rebuild something. But be careful with the tools. You might get distracted and hurt yourself-more than hitting your thumb with a hammer. You could get very badly hurt. And worse, you could hurt others.” She also said, “Lots of people around.” “It’s hot and dirty. There’s a guy… a red and white baseball cap. The cap has a logo on it. Chiefs. Kansas City Chiefs. I don’t get a name, but he has a nice smile.” The physic told Jenna that she had seen “fire that doesn’t burn” in her future. The physic told Amber that she’d saw color. Amber then asked if she would find love this summer, knowing that she already had a boyfriend that she truly loved and cared about. Saraphina said, “Not this summer; but college… one better than you already have.”
had caught her boyfriend cheating on her on prom night; the conflict was that she still wasn’t over it because she hadn’t talked to him since that night. Amber stated she had just wanted to visit the physic for fun of it and said she didn’t believe it was true; however, Jenna said she believed the readings.
the physic mentioned a cap exactly like this. Jenna spots a guy who she’s interested in because he’s taller than her six feet in height. They got up to leave after Dawn claimed she wasn’t ready for this.
Bubba Gump Shrimp Company and stopped to eat there. After being seated the three guys from the bakery walked in. They went over to sit with the girls; Jenna goes with the tall guy, whose name is Tank. Dawn got with the red cap guy, whose name is Brady. Amber got with the other guy, whose name is Sean. They talked and bonded and later decided to visit Bourbon Street. Everyone went their separate ways with their newly found friends. Dawn and Brady kissed but Dawn broke it with the excuse of having a curfew. They went around looking for the others and after finding them they walked to their dorms with Jenna and Tank hand in hand, Amber and Sean in deep conversation, and Dawn and Brady talking negatively about the kiss; Dawn enforcing the negativity. When they got to their dorm Jenna got a call from Tank.
s mother called asking who the guy was on MySpace. Drew, Dawn’s ex had emailed Dawn’s mom the picture. When they reached the site they found out Tank, Brady, and Sean were to work on the same house they were working on. They paired up like they had the night before, and after a long day of hard work they were off for the day and they went on a tour to a swamp. They paired up again and bonded the entire trip. The next day of working on the site, Jenna saw Tank’s shirtless back. On it was a tattoo of a blue and green flying dragon breathing red and blue flames. Fire that didn’t burn just as Jenna’s reading had read from the physic.
After that Amber went into a frantic because all of the psychic readings were coming true. She talked nervously while packing to leave New Orleans. She was afraid the psychic reading for her to find someone better would come true. Later that night, after Amber had left, Jenna was on the phone with Tank. As Dawn got out the shower Jenna held the phone towards her saying Brady wanted to speak with her. That morning Tank and Brady picked up Jenna and Dawn to eat out at Café Du Monde. Jenna and Tank were very close while Brady and Dawn talked and stared at one another. They went to the repairing site after eating and Dawn talked with Saraphina, the physic, who was also working on the site. She told Dawn that Amber would return with a guy with black hair. She also told Dawn and Jenna about the ghost tour they would be attending with Brady and Tank before leaving New Orleans.
relationship. They visited the guys dorm and sat in the hot tub. Jenna and Tank went to the dorm room but Brady and Dawn stayed outside. They went to dinner and after they finished eating they sat holding each other.
each couple went off to do their own thing and Brady and Dawn went to an outside market. Brady asked Dawn to help him pick out a gift for one of his sisters and she did. Later that day Brady told Jenna that he’d went to a physic. The physic had told him that she saw ‘life is good’ in his future, this is the logo Dawn’s hat had on it. Later that day they went on the ghost tour and afterwards they ate at McDonalds. Brady took Dawn for a ride in a carriage driven by a horse. She told him more about her break up and later that night in the comfort of her bed she got a call from Brady. She reminded him that she still had his sister’s necklace, and he told her that the necklace was really for her. That morning they worked on the house which was coming along great. Brady tossed Dawn a bottle of water every hour; this was something special he had started.
Amber’s break up with her boyfriend, Dawn made a careless mistake. She went and kissed Brady in front of all the guys, including Drew. Brady thought Dawn was using him and stopped talking to her; this was the hurt that Saraphina predicted. Later that night Dawn met with Drew at McDonalds because he’d wanted to talk to her. She told him she had forgiven him but they would never get back together. This was the solution to the problem of Dawn not being over what happened on prom night because she hadn’t talked to him since that night. After her conflict was solved she felt as if a ton of boulders had been lifted off of her.
the incident a little. A couple of days later there was a vampire tour, and Brady and Dawn were assigned together. They left the tour before it got started and let the time pass by with each other. They talked things over and got back on good terms. The next day they finished the house they were working on and later the girls sat around talking about everything that had happened.
A week later on their last day they’d half finished another house. They all went to the party on a riverboat later that evening. Amber and Sean, Tank and Jenna, and Dawn and Brady were together. Dawn kept thinking about the pact she had made with Brady not to see each other after leaving New Orleans. She was trying to find out how to tell Brady she had changed her mind and that she wanted to continue to see him. She simply told him that she wanted to see him after New Orleans. He replied, “Okay.” And they were together, even after New Orleans.