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Anonymous Posted 8 years ago
Grammar

Hi, I need your help to write a phrase

What is the correct way to write:

"responsible for the strategic direction and management for all operations in the region"

or

"responsible for the strategic direction and management of all operations across the region"

  

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Use #2. Broadly speaking, verbs are better than adjectives. Instead of 'responsible for', is there a suitable verb?

— Clive

  • Use #2.
  • Broadly speaking, verbs are better than adjectives.
  • Instead of 'responsible for', is there a suitable verb?
  • eg " set the strategic direction and oversaw management of all operations across the region"
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Use #2.


Broadly speaking, verbs are better than adjectives. Instead of 'responsible for', is there a suitable verb?

eg "set the strategic direction and oversaw management of all operations across the region"

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