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Etha5 Posted 18 years ago
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We hope that you are enjoying your summer as you get ready to join us here at the XXXXXUniversity of Jerusalem-.



This is a notification email, following a previous Email that I sent to you few days ago.





Please make sure you send back the forms I've attached to you few days ago regarding your personal information.



I would like to drow your attention to the empty part page that I need you to fill in and to send it back as soon as possible



Attached: application forms



Cheers,
  

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Etha5 Dear incoming students We hope that you are enjoying your summer as you get ready to join us here at the *** of Jerusalem. This is a follow-up email to the one that I sent to you a few days ago. Please make sure you send back the forms attached herewith , giving your personal information.

  • Etha5 Dear incoming students We hope that you are enjoying your summer as you get ready to join us here at the *** of Jerusalem.
  • This is a follow-up email to the one that I sent to you a few days ago.
  • Please make sure you send back the forms attached herewith , giving your personal information.
  • I would like to draw your attention to the empty part - page that I need you t o fill in and send back as soon as possible Attached: application forms Cheers, ***
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Etha5

Dear incoming students

We hope that you are enjoying your summer as you get ready to join us here at the *** of Jerusalem. This is a follow-up email to the one that I sent to you a few days ago.



Please make sure you send back the forms attached herewith, giving your personal information.

I would like to dr
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Hello Etha5

Dear incoming students,

We hope that you are enjoying your summer as you get ready to join us here at the *** of Jerusalem.

This is a reminder about the e-mail I sent a few days ago, which included a form? two forms? (how many)? Please make sure you complete those forms in their entirety and return them as soon as possible.

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