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Once upon a Time, a fairy named tomas decieded to go for a walk in the forest to vist a group of elf and dwarf for a party to celebrate the new year . Along his way, tomas came upon several rabb and fox. Being that tomas was a good Fairy, he asked the rabbits and foxes to come along and join the fun . However the rabbits and foxes did not enjoy traveling with fairy, nor did they enjoy the funn, so they gracefully declined the invitation that tomas extended . So a very Sad, yet understanding tomas continued upon his short journey to vist the Dwarfs and elf.
  

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Once upon a Ti me, a fairy named t omas decieded to go for a walk in the forest to vist a group of elf and dwarf for a party to celebrate the new year . Along his way, t omas came upon several rabb and fox . Being that tomas was a good F airy, he asked the rabbits and foxes to come along and join the fun .

  • Once upon a Ti me, a fairy named t omas decieded to go for a walk in the forest to vist a group of elf and dwarf for a party to celebrate the new year .
  • Along his way, t omas came upon several rabb and fox .
  • Being that tomas was a good F airy, he asked the rabbits and foxes to come along and join the fun .
  • However the rabbits and foxes did not enjoy traveling with fairy, nor did they enjoy the funn, so they gracefully declined the invitation that tomas extended .
  • So a very S ad, yet understanding tomas continued ( with) upon his short journey to vist the Dwarfs and elf.
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Once upon a Time, a fairy named tomas decieded to go for a walk in the forest to vist a group of elf and dwarf for a party to celebrate the new year . Along his way, tomas came upon

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