Hi I need an objective eye on the following work certificate for my bookkeeper can someone lend a hand of assistance?

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00This letter is to certify that XXXX. Was employed as a bookkeeper from November 2006 till October 2007 in ......... at ............... for one years. She began here as a bookkeeper and continued to serve with increasing skill in that capacity.02br
00xxxxxxx00´s responsibilities were in the following sectores:00 00Recordkeeping involves preparing accounts receivable, accounts payable, and payroll, and maintaining patron stock records, the general ledger, and office records.00 00 00During xxxxx's service with us I, like many others in the department, came to know and appreciate her. Very goal oriented, XXXX was always punctual, yet easygoing. She was very much a people person00XXXXX demonstrated from early in her tenure that she understood what business is all about. She was well organized. She kept a sharp eye on the bottom line, but realized too that customer satisfaction is what makes or breaks your business. I suppose doing well in business is easy if you are, as she was, efficient by nature. 00I would like to be very clear about why XXXXX is no longer with us. XXXXXX is available for new challenges only because of her desire to learn and grow further. We would have loved to see her stay, but certainly understand her need to advance beyond the positions we have available. 00In closing, let me say I have no hesitation in recommending XXXXXX for any position pertaining to . I feel confident she would be an asset to your organization.00Sincerely,02br
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