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Topic: One day, the world's oil and gas reserves will run out. The search for alternative energy source like wind power, solar power; burning waste and water power are causing as much environmental damage as the oil and nuclear power sources they are intended to replace. In what extent do you agree or disagree?

Recently, the global has come up with the concern of oil and gas shortage. Therefore, the detection of other kinds of energy is extremely more necessary than ever in order to provide human's activities. However some argue that these energy is as devastating the environment as the oil and gas has been done. I completely disagree with this view.

It is undeniable that using a great deal of oil and nuclear energy has been leading to the pollution of the environment dangerously. Firstly, by running a large number of factories, the atmosphere is being polluted in an alarming rate. A huge amount of emission are being released into the air per year which expects to be non-stop in the long run. Moreover, these energy are being exhausted due to the high exploitation. Therefore, researching for the new energy such as water, solar and wind power is a must action that governments need to conduct. Such of these energy is a unlimited resource which provide mankind with more power to use in many fields such as farming, production of electricity, etc.

In another word, solar, water and wind energy is being considers as the environmentally friendly resources since they are all renewable. It is available in the nature and do not harm to the surroundings as soil and gas energy. Beside, these three sort of energy provide us with plenty of power which is more likely to be beneficial to the production of human. Therefore, we need to make use of them timely if we do not want to face the issue of running out of energy in the future.

In conclusion, I believe that we need to replace energy are likely to be exhausted as oil and gas in order to maintain the live of our planet. Also, I suppose that renewable energy have no damage to the environment, and would be more useful for mankind as well.