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Some people believe that universities should allow equal quantities of man and woman students in every subject. To me, I agree with the above statement.

Firstly, I think that if there is an equality in the numbers of male and female students in a subject, a lot of talented people will be supported and developed because talent does not depend on which gender are you. For example, Marie Currie, a female genius chemist, who was famous for her invention of founding uranium. So if she was not supported to study her major when she was young, the world would not have a talented person.

Secondly, being fair in the numbers of students who take in every subject shows a respect of the ambitions of students as you could understand that each person has her/his own dream and she/he works for it. Man could not only be good at science or technical subjects but also be accomplished at social ones and so could female. Accepting the equal numbers of gender students is a precious chance for them to show up their talents. For example, there are so many great architects who are women and also there are so many males who is one of great cloth designers in the world.

In a word, there are a lot of arguments whether universities accept the equal numbers of male and female students in every subject but I agree with the universities that they should do that.