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The given line graph illustrates the proportion of travelers to England who went to four separate attractions in Brighton over the course of 30 years starting from 1980.

As can be seen, it is noticeable that the percentage of visitors to Pavilion and Pier witnessed an upward tendency, whereas the proportion visiting Art Gallery and Festival tended to decline significantly.

To be more specific, in 1980, Pier was the least popular attraction in Brighton but then there were considerable improvements to reach a high point of over 20% in 2010. A similar trend could be observed in the percentage visiting Pavilion, which starts from approximately 24% in 1980 but then manage to soar to around 50% in 1995 and became the most popular attraction in Brighton in 2010, despite some minor fluctuations.

At the beginning of period, Festival was the most favorite attraction for tourists to England to reach a peak of exactly 30%. However, this figure fell slightly over the next 5 years and remained relatively stable to roughly 28% at the end of period. The proportion of travelers going to Art Gallery also experienced the same tendency which was only about 21% in 1980. This number leapt to about 37% over a half of decade, before hitting a bottom of less than 10% in 2010.