Hi Guys! Please check if the below letter is correct. thanks!

Dear Sir,

Please be informed that I will be leaving on April for my annual vacation. In regards to this, I would like to request for your approval to grant me a loan of Dhs. 20,000 to be settled by deducting Dhs. 5000 per month as my money is not enough to cover my stay in my home country.

Your kind consideration is highly appreciated.