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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

Hi guys! Is this sentence grammaticaly correct? Thanks in advance!

ALONG WITH THE NOTIFICATION
REGARDING INTENTION TO CHANGE THE INDIRECT WAY OF ACQUIRING SHARES
  

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Try rewriting this with a subject and a verb . When you do so, please do not use all capital letters (it is difficult to read, and it is considered tantamount to shouting on the internet). Be sure to punctuate the sentence and begin it with a capital letter.

— Philip

  • Try rewriting this with a subject and a verb .
  • When you do so, please do not use all capital letters (it is difficult to read, and it is considered tantamount to shouting on the internet).
  • Be sure to punctuate the sentence and begin it with a capital letter.
  • You may need two sentences to say what you mean.
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Try rewriting this with a subject and a verb. When you do so, please do not use all capital letters (it is difficult to read, and it is considered tantamount to shouting on the internet). Be sure to punctuate the sentence and begin it with a capital letter. You may need two sentences to say what you mean.
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Sorry for the capital letters, I don't usually do it but this time I simply copied/pasted text. It's legal, therefore, I cannot really break it into 2 separate sentences. Could you just tell me whether this make sense in English? Thank you for your help!
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Also, I probably should've mentioned this at the beginning, it's just an excerpt from a really long sentence (I 'don't want to give you a headache and past it all) so all I want to know is whether it make sense. Thanks.
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