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Hi everyone. This is my passage for the homework that our English teacher gave us yesterday. Please help me correct it. Thank you. The topic is: MY PASSION.

I'm 18 year old and I'm a freshman at Ton Duc Thang University. My passion in life is Vovinam martial. I usually practice every Monday, Wednesday and Friday each week in my school. My idol is my Vovinam martial's teacher, he is very good. I admire him so much. I have practiced martial arts for almost 4 years. I really love it and I wish I had good health to pursue my passion. Write soon.Thank you for reading this.
  

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I'm 18 year old (Kim is one year old. Kim can walk now. Hung is twelve year s old.

  • I'm 18 year old (Kim is one year old.
  • Kim can walk now.
  • Hung is twelve year s old.
  • ) and I'm a freshman at Ton Duc Thang University.
  • My passion in life is Vovinam martial arts.
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I'm 18 year old (Kim is one year old. Kim can walk now. Hung is twelve years old. ) and I'm a freshman at Ton Duc Thang University. My passion in life is Vovinam martial arts. (Martial is an adjective. You need a noun after it. ) I us

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