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TOPIC: Rich countries should support poor countries in terms of aid for health care & education.

Nowadays, the poor countries are facing numerous issues relating to economy, healthcare, and education. Meanwhile, the prosperous countries gained some significant achievements in teaching and medicine. Therefore, I totally agree with the idea the wealth countries should support the poor countries regarding aid for health care & education. This essay will discuss the reasons why I agree with this idea.

Most inhabitants in the poor countries live below the poverty line. Therefore, they don’t have enough condition to get access with the high quality healthcare services. Moreover, in the poor countries, people live with serious challenges such as fresh water, food, and lack of medicine. These are the chief reasons why they usually face with the perilous epidemic which has negative effects on their health. The rich nations should help the poor nations by supporting the foodstuff, modern medical technics to help them get out of poverty and backwardness.

On the other hand, in the poor ones there are a lot of talented students. Although the condition of study is very poor, they study very hard. Some students win many competitions taking place on over the world. They also get the scholarship of the reputable universities of America and French. For example, a student names KHOI, a student of Hoang Hoa Tham high school won the scholarship of UWC. He wrote an essay regarding “Benefit of watching sex videos”. At the age of 18, he is the youngest student getting the valuable scholarship in Vietnam.

To sum up, I would like to restate that the well-being nations should support the poor nations in terms of healthcare as well as education so that they can enhance the living standard of inhabitants and many fields of their lives.