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THE TOPIC:

LIVING IN A COUNTRY WHERE YOU HAVE TO SPEAK A FOREIGN LANGUAGE CAN CAUSE SERIOUS SOCIAL PROBLEMS, AS WELL AS PRACTICAL PROBLEMS.

TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE WITH THIS STATEMENT?

It is hard to live in countries which use their foreign language instead of your mother tongue because a foreign language is always a hurdle for people to live in other countries where their mother tongue is not usually used. This essay agrees with this topic because of two reasons: Firstly, foreign language will be a barrier for the communication of people and it is also a huge problem for them when they apply for their jobs

Firstly, communication is the main features that can help people to talk to their friends or their family or to express their opinion, the impossibility or difficulty in speaking the foreign language can be a barrier for them to do the above activities. For example, in the meeting of an American company, when you don’t know how to speak English, it seems too hard for you to express your opinion and your ways to help the company as well

Secondly, lack of foreign languages is also a problem for people who want to apply for their job in foreign countries. Language is compulsory factor for people who want to have a profession in foreign countries, the people who can’t speak foreign language can’t have the job, they will have other jobs which use mother tongue and their salary won’t be higher than the job which uses foreign language. For instance, the American currency is higher than Vietnamese’s, so everyone wants to have a job in American companies, but their lack of speaking English hinder them to have the job and force them to work in Vietnamese company which has smaller salary than American’s

In conclusion, the difficulty in speaking foreign languages is a barrier for people when they live in other countries. This essay agrees with the topic because both communication and applying for jobs are two features that are dramatically affected by the lack of foreign language