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Thai Hoa Posted 5 years ago
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Hi everyone, I read the IELTS Writing on Cambridge 13 this morning, I wrote the task but I don't know whether it is the good task. I hope that you can check for me. Thank you so much for your check

The direction to the city hospital in two different years (2007 and 2010) are clearly expressed by the two given sketches

It can be seen from two sketches, The City Hospital in the years 2007 and 2010 was surrounded by Ring Road, and also the way to the City Hospital was Hospital Rd. But some traits are different between 2007 and 2010. The first thing was the public car park, it didn’t appear in 2007 but it could be seen next to Hospital Rd in 2010. The second thing is the roundabout which was added in 2010 but it couldn’t be seen in 2007. And the bus stop is the final thing, with the map in 2007, the bus stop was far from the city hospital but in the 2010 map was different, the bus station was next to the Hospital Rd.

Overall, the directions to the city hospital from the two given sketches are conspicuously different. The different things are the public car park and the roundabout. On the other hand, the staff car park is still the same in 2007 and 2010

  

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Please attach an image of what you are writing about. We cannot help you if we can't see the figure. Please read my advice for Task 1 essays.

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