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TOPIC: Deforestation caused by human activity is happening in many parts of the world, with serious results for the environment. What do you think can be done to solve this problem.

MY ANSWER:

Deforestation is a serious global problem.Trees can be used for different reasons like for producing paper,books , houses,furniture and etc.Nowadays wood is one of the essential material in our modern life depends.Whereas,this is the main causes for deforestation.To inhibit this problem,I come up with some ideas.
These days logging industries have tripled.People don't care about the world,only they want to make more money and that caused a lot of damages to the forest,so first one is set strict laws of banning illegal logging.There are many laws for illegal logging ,but people still doing illegal activities that are deforest.I think they should be stricter, because law play a major role of protecting the forest.
Next one is everyone must reduce waste. In our daily life we use more furniture items which can make by wood. For some reasons people throw away their furniture.For example, furniture may look old ,in fact it still can be used, but they will throw it away and buy a new one. More requirement will increase more supplement, so reducing waste is a pretty way to solve the problem.
Furthermore, being less wasteful is not the only solution of the problem, but also we can replant many tress in place where we cut down the trees and also it like be replacing old trees by planting young trees. Also do research on wood alternative i.e Fiber glass products can be used to make furniture and etc, instead of using wood . I think these things are good approach , although we cannot prevent environmental impacts completely but to some certain extent we can control. In my opinion logging should be strictly banned and alternative things must be found.