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Aliiyz Posted 16 years ago
Letter Writing
Hi everyone :) I need somebody to check my letter pls. I appreciate any help. Have a great day ahead!
To the manager:
Greetings!
This is to formally inform your respectable company that (restaurant name) is now open for Christmas gathering/birthday party or any occasion, made available to all.
(restaurant name) is the original when it comes to "front cooking" and offers "eating as if you were visiting the marketplace". We have strong demands on freshness and quality, preparing meals right in front of the guests and the informal atmosphere of a market all satisfy now more than ever the high standards that our quality-conscious customers have begun to place on a healthy diet and transparency. The guests may stroll through the market and feel lured by the attractive stands as they then select from a variety of top-quality and fresh products. The gentle preparation of this wide range of products can therefore be experiences "love" with every one of their senses.
We prefer to purchase our fresh products from local suppliers and these are delivered to us straight from the fields and farm, so can guarantee freshness every day.
So, if planning for gathering, (restaurant name) is the place to be!
We promise the party will not be a bore!
You'rs Sincerely,
Aliiyz
Greetings!
This is to formally inform your respectable company that (restaurant name) is now open for Christmas gathering/birthday party or any occasion, made available to all.
(restaurant name) is the original when it comes to "front cooking" and offers "eating as if you were visiting the marketplace". We have strong demands on freshness and quality, preparing meals right in front of the guests and the informal atmosphere of a market all satisfy now more than ever the high standards that our quality-conscious customers have begun to place on a healthy diet and transparency. The guests may stroll through the market and feel lured by the attractive stands as they then select from a variety of top-quality and fresh products. The gentle preparation of this wide range of products can therefore be experiences "love" with every one of their senses.
We prefer to purchase our fresh products from local suppliers and these are delivered to us straight from the fields and farm, so can guarantee freshness every day.
So, if planning for gathering, (restaurant name) is the place to be!
We promise the party will not be a bore!
You'rs Sincerely,
Aliiyz
Top answer
I have undelined some problem areas and struck out useless verbiage: To the manager: Greetings! This is to formally inform your respectable company that (restaurant name) is now open for Christmas gathering/birthday part y or an y occ asion , made available to all . (restaurant name) is the original when it comes to "front cooking" and offers "eat ing as if you were visiting the marketpla ce".
- I have undelined some problem areas and struck out useless verbiage: To the manager: Greetings!
- This is to formally inform your respectable company that (restaurant name) is now open for Christmas gathering/birthday part y or an y occ asion , made available to all .
- (restaurant name) is the original when it comes to "front cooking" and offers "eat ing as if you were visiting the marketpla ce".
- We have strong demands on freshness and quality, preparing meals right in front of the gues ts a n d the informal atmosphere of a market all satisfy now more than ever the high standards that our quality-conscious customers have begun to place on a healthy diet and transparency.
- The guests may stroll through the market and feel lured by the attractive stands as they then select from a variety of top-quality and fresh products.
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I have undelined some problem areas and struck out useless verbiage:
To the manager:
Greetings!
This is toformally inform your respectable company that (restaurant name) is now open for Christmas gathering/birthday party or any occasion, made available to all.
(restaurant name) is the origina
To the manager:
Greetings!
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(restaurant name) is the origina
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