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Cinder Nguyen Posted 6 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Hi everyone ,i going to take CAE but it is very hard for me to self -assess my own wrting. Whoever familiar with this kind of standardized tests please make some constructive criticisms so i can improve. Thank you very much

prompt :write your report for the college principal as outlined : CARRERS CONFERENCE

VANCOUVER HALL , Friday-Sunday,9am-6pm

exhibition-over 100 differents jobs

talks on wide range of careers

experts available to give advice

notes on students's views

-exhibition great

- some talks good

-not enough people to answer questions

-better for science students than language or history students

A REPORT ON CAREERS CONFERENCE

A BROAD OVERVIEW OF THE CONFERENCE

The conference was held in the sophisticated Vancouver Hall .It took place on Friday and Sunday from 9am to 6 pm . It displayed an exhibition which pertains over 100 jobs.

PURPOSE OF THE CONFERENCE

The conference served a main purpose of introducing a wide range of careers. However , it did not stop at providing surface-level answers. The conference gravitated more towards delivering more in-depth, comprehensive antidote to students's unease of their future prospects. This conference had this merit because there was a board of committee encompassed by groups of eminent experts to dispense their sage advice .

OPINIONS OF STUDENTS

Most of the students expressed their satisfaction with the conference. However, there are two problems at hand that we need to resolve. First, a lot of students's questions remains unsanswered due to a deluge of students but limitations of the number of experts. Second, the conference is better-suited for science-allied students than language or history students .

RECOMMENDATIONS

Overall, it appears that students are comparatively satisfied with the conference , with the exception of scant number of experts , especially those from language or history field. It is suggested that we should multiply the number of experts who are a wealth of knowledge for language or history students .

  

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Please include all the instructions so we have the same context as you do and we can assess how well you followed them. 1 You are studying at a college in Canada. Recently you and some other students attended a two-day Careers Conference.

  • Please include all the instructions so we have the same context as you do and we can assess how well you followed them.
  • 1 You are studying at a college in Canada.
  • Recently you and some other students attended a two-day Careers Conference.
  • As the college paid for you, the College Principal has asked you to write a report about the conference and you have made notes on their views.
  • Read the conference programme together with your notes below.
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Please include all the instructions so we have the same context as you do and we can assess how well you followed them.

 1 You are studying at a college in Canada. Recently you and some other students attended a two-day Careers Conference. As the college paid for you, the College Principal has asked you to write a report about the conference and you have made notes on their view
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It would help you to write a better report if you had ever attended a career fair. Apparently you are unfamiliar with this type of event, which is very common in North America.

Here is a picture of the exhibition space taken at a career conference. You can see the company representatives at the booths who give students information about careers at their company.

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