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Andybusy Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

Hi everyone, How are you?

It's me again! I have a question of the sentence that I have made, my teacher give me a comment like this "weak, need revision". Can you help me to revise it!

"A 3-month-old baby is dancing while watching a music video DVD"

to describe a 1 min video of a baby watching an English learning video!
  

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A 3-month-old baby is dancing while watching a music video.

— Mister Micawber

  • A 3-month-old baby is dancing while watching a music video.
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A 3-month-old baby is dancing while watching a music video.
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It's me again! I have a question about a of the sentence that I have made, my teacher gave me a comment like this "weak, needs revision". Can you help me to revise it?

Well, that must be some precocious baby! All the three-month-olds I've ever seen could only drink, smile, cry, and sleep.

I really don't see anything grammaticall
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